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Roaring cries of war and steel,
thoughts of pity you cannot feel.
Words wrought with sounds of treason,
bound and gag with no rhyme or reason.
Men and beast die in vain,
no one else will know their pain.
Forgotten lore replaces blood,
ghostly shadows of where they stood.
Friend and foe fill the graves,
never to stand and fight again.
Monuments to the brave and free,
or a testament to one mans dynasty?
Bored again.
Too lazy to draw...
...so... POETRY! :D
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Daghrgenzeen Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love your way with words. :D
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FlawedPotential Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
It's all half-assed, but apparently people think it sounds good,
so I'm okay with that. XD
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Daghrgenzeen Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh. :D
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EwaGladka Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Simple, but well written ;)
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FlawedPotential Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
Too kind!
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EwaGladka Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :D
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Not bad man, boredom is my finest inspiration, i wrote all my poems during class.
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FlawedPotential Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I actually began writing poetry during college lectures...
...so I totally get that. :D
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